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    April 19

    Original Poem: In my memory

    A terrible hurt
    A terrible memory
    A terrible sorrow
    Burnt for eternity
    Eyes so brown
    Lips so red
    Why does loving you
    Make me so dead?
    I can't forget what
    Didn't end well
    Can't laugh off
    What wasn't funny
    I have to forget
    But I just can't
    Can't erase what
    Was never mine
    I close my eyes
    Wishing you were here
    To mend a heart so broken and
    Teared
    To drench the thirst from my dying lips
    To feed my hunger so piercling deep
    To see your eyes and read your lips
    Just to know you still love me
    Your so near yet so far away
    That's what I heard you once say
    I love you so, so much, more then you know
    My soul I would give
    Just to see you love
    My life is worth nothing compared to yours
    That's why it hurts so much to see your hurts.
    A love so pure, so honest, so faithful
    So burning
    A love so kind, so gentle,
    So beautifully yearning
    A love above all loves before
    Patient, forgiving and understanding
    That's why I'll love you now
    Yesterday
    Tomorrow
    & Forever
    & that's how it'll stay.
    & always
    In my memory…………….
    (c) 2005 Jenifer Reyes

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    Scott burtonwrote:
    Nice poem.
     
    I should send it to my ex-girlfriend.
    July 4
    JUDYwrote:
    Hola Princess How are ya?  Just thought I'd stop by and pay a short visit to see whats new =)  Hope you are doin well!  Your Poem is sad ;/  you got a grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8 talent keep up the grrrrr8 work! 
     
    Many Hugzz,
     
    Queen Of Heartzz
    May 5
    SassyKatwrote:
    Hey Jen the poems are awesome! just doing a blog walk and thought I'd drop by again..have a great week!
     
    *Hugz*
    SassyKat
    May 3
    123/sunwrote:

    Holle Tassie thanks for callin byon ma .

    AS water flowa and flowers faii without leaving traces,

          one and the same longing

    O'erflows two lonely places.

    I cannot get rid of this sorrw:kept apart

    from my eyebrows,

    It gnaws my heart.

    MIss Tassie I love you

    your  dutifully shiran

    Apr. 27
     
    G'Day from Brisbane, Australia
     
    I just made a msn group so if you want to join
    click this link CLICK HERE !
     
    Or I am still on my quest so could you leave 1, 2 or 3
    comments so click this link CLICK HERE !
     
    Thanks,
    Jono
    Apr. 26
    Nice site. some gentle poems here, also.
       Keep it up, and take care.
       
       ps: Pay a visit to my space if you get the chance.
    Apr. 26
    123/sunwrote:
    HI jen  love that new pic.miss  I  kiss you.
    Apr. 25
    Marina Bauerwrote:
    Hello Jen!!
    I wanna say you something:

    http://img280.imageshack.us/img280/8499/ellolo8ml.jpg

    You can vote every day, I will need all the support as possible... you know, I joined the comp 22 days late!
    I vote for Terry!
    *BARKS*
    TERRY

    Apr. 25
    Thanks for stopping by. My name's Celeste and I'm 26...
    Anyway thanks for the comment on my poem it really means a lot. :)
    I just write how I feel and from my experiences, and you are right
    it sucks when somebody doesn't return how you feel, or withholds affections
    and feelings for one reason or another, be it another person or other stresses
    in their life. Anyway feel free to stop by anytime Have a great day
    Apr. 25
    Chriswrote:
    Hey sweety.
    I just noticed on your dad's blog that it was your birthday the other day so I wish you a happy belated birthday :D I have been a bit late again as to getting around replies so sorry for the late wishes :P Lovely poem btw and picture choice was really good to match. Hope you have a great week.
    Chris x
    Apr. 25
    Marina Bauerwrote:
    Hello Jen!!
    My lovely dog Terry had recently joined "Pets Competition" hosted by Jessica.. can you please vote for him?
    Click here and leave a comment saying:
    I VOTE FOR TERRY
    Wanna see how beautiful is my dog?? ---> http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/6762/terry8qm.jpg
    Competition started on 1st May and ends on 1st June I think...
    Thanks a lot!
    *KISSES*
    MARINA

    Apr. 24
    JUDYwrote:
    Hola!!! Just passin through to wish you a very Happy Birthday!  Hope All Your Birthday Wishes Come True!!!
     
     
     
    XOXOXOX,
     
    Queen Of Heartzz
    Apr. 21
    Just stopping by to wish you a happy birthday!!! and I really like your poems! Especially the forbidden love one... Well anyway Have a good one!
    Apr. 21
    Rosemarywrote:
    what a lovely space you have here.  I loved all your poems.  I just came to wish you a VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!  Hope it is wonderful.  birthday hugs for you.
    Love,
    Rosemary
    Apr. 21

    GENERATED COMMENT BY XENA:

    http://spaces.msn.com/XenaPrincessWarrior

    To all my friends/bloggers,

    Just to let you know I am holding a Comp. Blend CSI

    on my space. Come and check it out & follow the CSI rules.

    To those who all want to enter!

    Please check it out now and don’t delay. The last day to enter is

    May 18th, 2006.

    All winners will be announced on May 19th, 2006.

    So come and have fun and show your artistic side to all…

    Good luck to you!

    PS I will be judging on originality & uniqueness re: to your design.

    Have a good day. The CSI sky is the limit. {wink}

    Xena

    Montreal, Quebec

     

    PS Sorry Jenifer for the mistake on your age! hehehehe I thought you were already 17y going on 18y...oh well, it was a extra one for good luck! {wink}

    Apr. 21
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    Apr. 21
    Hi Jen,
    I'm stopping by to wish you a very Happy Birthday.
    Your poem is beautiful, you're very talented!

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    ..::...¨´•¤JEN!! FROM NIKKI ¤¸.• ..::..
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    Apr. 21
    Cherylwrote:
    Hope you have a realy good Birthday from beginning to end
    Hugs
    Cheryl
    Apr. 20
    Majawrote:
    Wishing you a very happy birthday...
    Apr. 20
    Nadia Realwrote:

    Hi Jen,

    happy birthday and wishing you the all the best on your natal day!

     

    Nadine

    Apr. 20

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